Sunday, April 6, 2014

It Could Be Within Us Comments

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Happily she walked towards home.
Bubbling and rippling like river foam.
A man passed by dressed well.
Entered her nostrils fishy smell.
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Md. Asadullah
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Akhtar Jawad 20 April 2014

Na thi hal ki jab hamen apne khabar, rahe dekhte auron ke aib-o-hunar.....Pari apni buraiyon pe jo nazar to niga mein koi bura na raha. Mujhse bura na koey. What a poem!

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Gajanan Mishra 06 April 2014

running with a smile, I like it.

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