It Can Be Said Comments

‘…We’re in us // Not in our own me…’ Wonderful lines! Very softly composed and appealing.

Nice poem where poet has given many ways. '...To be in together in dark of // Inverted saucer // To find stealth // Under the just born dusk sky….' Excellent imagination portrayed.

Finest emotion for overwhelmingly intimate togetherness. Ten ++ for colorful finish. PO PO

So many things Poet said in the form of ‘It Can Be Said’. Finally wonderful conclusion vide infra - It can be said to her All are futile to say As there is nothing to say We’re in us Not in our own me. Ten+++ WR

lovely poem were in us a great line 10