Monday, November 10, 2008

It Applies To You Comments

Rating: 2.7

I can't believe I spent my time wishing, hoping that you would see
all the things you've done wrong and not only to me
what you do is so wrong and you don't seem to mind
You pretend and you play and manipulate time after time
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Chocolate Bunny
COMMENTS

awww, sweet! i got a few people i'd dedicate this poem to. nice write!

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Luis Alvarado 20 December 2008

Nice! Great job on this one and a strong warning to the manipulators.

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Chantelle Nixon 11 November 2008

Very good. I like it.

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