Thursday, February 19, 2015

It All Starts Today Comments

Rating: 4.5

It all starts today,
Sun, games, and outdoor play.
Waves crashing and breaking on the shore,
Sand laying there, all piled up, just begging for more.
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Smoky Hoss 07 April 2020

Beautiful! ! ! The stunning, wonder-filled picture you have here presented, cause my heart to long for happy, carefree, days..... for that, thank you most sincerely.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 April 2020

A nicely crafted poem on summer holidays. There is fun and games to enjoy the holidays. Congrats.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2020

Casting shadows across the ground, Giving off rays to turn the skin golden brown. The sun is at it's brightest in the early afternoon, All this fun starts in the month of June! .. this is beautiful., simply beautiful congrats for becoming POD.

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 April 2020

Beautiful expression on the summer entertainment life/// congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 April 2019

Enjoying the fun and frolic in summer (vacations) . Great poem, well deserved poem of the Day.

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Hassan Hayati 07 April 2019

Yes, as per the Persian calendar summer starts on June 21st (Tir 1st) Summer is my own favorite season too. since I believe life is more current in summer, congratulations for being selected as the poem of day.

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Kevin Patrick 07 April 2019

Summer is still a little off, but with this poem you bring it a couple of inches closer! , a sunny poem full of verve and spirit, good choice for Poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 April 2019

Wonderful poem of the day, dear Ma'am Elizabeth. Congrats for being chosen....10++++++

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Lyn Paul 07 April 2019

Light and uplifting words with a welcoming title. Thank you and I enjoyed your Poet Page.

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Tom Allport 07 April 2019

A poem full of fun just waiting for the summer sun.

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Warm and active summer is dear to all for arranging and enjoying picnics and play on the sea-shore where the waves crashing and breaking on the shore, Nice poem on summer, congrats being POD

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Adrian Flett 07 April 2019

A nice balance of rhyme and rhythm. Work with other forms of rhyme in particular to prevent a sense of monotony that comes from the rhyming couplet. Well written poem keep writing.

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Dipak adhya 07 April 2019

all this fun starts in the month of June.... Good

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 April 2019

Core, store! Breaking on the shore. 🤗 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 April 2019

beautiful poem penned on the life of the June month

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2019

The sun shines bright. Full of heat and ready to burst. Casting shadows across the ground, Giving off rays to turn the skin golden brown. waiting anxiously for the summer. a very good poem with lots of anticipations and expectations. may your desires for the summer come true.. tony Congrata! ! for POD

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Kim Barney 07 April 2019

Congratulations on having this selected as member poem of the day! An exciting preview of summer!

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Elizabeth Wrobel

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