Sunday, October 8, 2006

It All Gets Real...... Comments

Rating: 5.0

IT all gets real when your broken
and twisted, and you land right on
your ass,
still the news peaple say , sit tight,
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun 13 October 2006

Very interesting poem David....seems like that's what it takes sometimes, I think readers will put their own meaning into this based on how they live their lives...it will either be something they can relate to or it will remind them of someone they know.

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Patricia Gale 08 October 2006

Splendid piece.... It all gets real when your broken and twisted, great line.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 October 2006

DAVID...Great Lyricals, indeed...1,4,5...hey those #'s equal out to 10! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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David Gerardino 08 October 2006

fellow poets, this is a song id written long ago, pretty much,1,4,5, , ,

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