Friday, January 31, 2014

It All Ends Sadly Comments

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It All Ends Sadly
Written by: Wilfred Charles Mellers
Friday, January 31,2014
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Wilfred Mellers
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Katelin Taylor 31 January 2014

Very nice. I love the rhyming pattern and of course the topic! I love the line Poisoned sowed reaped putrefying seeds; there is something about using these words in a chain that adds to the atmosphere of the poem. Very nice job sir.

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Kinston, Jamaica, West Indies
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