It Ain'T A Poem - 1. Comments

This poem reminded of the lines'What is this life if full of care? We have no time to stand and stare....' We are so much trapped in our mundane busy existance....that we hardly have time for the finer aspects of life. Beautiful imagery of an Indian monsoon.....Thanks for sharing.

Suberb, nice poem, very beautifully penned ur experience, awesome10+

such a lovely must have eased you out before an appointment..and that's how we seem to be running around without even seeing our roofs...how well you brought each and every scene

the poem is so serene....it makes u want to be there.....so lovely! ! !

had i been there i m pretty sure i wouldnot have obsereved things the way u did. simply awesome.

Superb gift of a vista to the reader...how else to get rid of the routine monotony other than visualising such soothing serenity...great

I agree with you, so many beautiful, simple things in life pass us by while we are rushing headlong into the future. Very nicely done. Anna

ur own version of god s own country...truely enchanting n engaging u ve to take all of us there..........

Beautiful description, at times we all have been through this experience but we fail to put it so beautifully in words......great work.

Beautiful imagery..nice thought. Good poem. Very nice.

wish cud have been there in the journey, it made the whole travel amazingly beautiful

Sun kissed hills and angelic mist; Should be on a traveller's list As they are the companion of thee Without them no journey Gud write...

wonderful imagery...wonderful visualization shows the swiftness of your mind great share... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

It began as a poem then turned into descriptive prose. Does it matter? I enjoyed my journey with you. Irene

u wrote about nature n rain....beautiful imagery....just brought a smile on my face....gud to see the wisdom flowing thru ur poem....life is indeed to be enjoyed as a beautiful fiza.....a 10+ ...: -)

This piece is full of vivid images of your tour...you treat your reader to some breathtaking scenes in nature...good write

Really a nice one from you. How nicely you have amalgamated - - words of wisdom with the alluring/charming nature. This was a real surprise for me. The rythm of this poem is really nice. Its like flowing like a dancing river. You can say i just glided through your poem. An effortless six hit by tendulkar. smooooth. I might have many times enjoyed being close to such beautiful nature, but didnt know it could be just as beautifully put into words. Man, I cant lie so you deserve 2 for this work. You know i am kidding.10+ buddy. I am a nature lover so if you have something in your fertile mind, just let it come out for us. thanks

wowwwwwwwwww nature unfolds itself always its for us to see and enjoy it- lovely you've brought out the imagery very well- specially of children returning from school-- i became nostalgic for a moment thought of my early school days when i never wanted to go to school and grandpa had to bribe me lol! ! ! ! ! ! ill give you an A+++++ and 10+++ anjali