Saturday, August 27, 2005

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It lingers within our shadows
taking all without regret,
Leaving behind tear stained linen
and a future never met.
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Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun 27 August 2005

Thank you David, I appreciate your comments. Take care :)

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David Gerardino 27 August 2005

I think this is one of your best poems, very deep, real, and right to the vein........

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