It doesn't demand, extra space.
As for time, it takes what is given
and asks for nothing further. In this
it is like a flower, whose petals
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Wow awesome similes you created in this fabulous description of time. The comparisons are creatively formulated. Kudos. Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too titled, ' smart phones and smart cars...."
I find your characterizations of time fascinating, Daniel (am I reading this right?) . The bell ringing and wounded animal images zing for me. -Glen
A fantastic poem from the pen of a great modern poet.