Isthmus Of Pain And Joy Comments

Excellent write of loss, tears, at last hope shines.

The powerful reference to our dualistic reality is very strongly and well expressed in this piece. Awesome job on capturing the feelings of loss when your dad passed away, I can surely empathize with that.

yassss. keep writing I love it!

I see... bitter cold on our side of the veil, joy on the other, where the dearly deprted feast... nice job

I see... bitter cold on this side of the veil, joy on the other, where the dearly departed feast... nice job

Indeed, this is a very well description of which an individual at times may feels as if though they are stuck between anger and happiness. I truly enjoyed this poem! Nice piece

Tears covered one face. Yes! we have traveled. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The silence was speaking to you Akachukwu… silence tells all and is yours and my best writing advisor at times.Well done my friend a lovely play on words and their hidden meanings.Keep writing.Your words deserve to be told….and read.

A towering and triumphal ending. I always like happy endings. Well done my friend!

A deep and heartfelt poem, Akachukwu. Thanks for sharing. Peace