Nothing happens…do I wish it?
In a comfortable cage—stagnation:
Seize the day! Carpe Diem!
Dare I to escape the isolation?
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Outstanding write! I love the depth of emotions beautifully expressed, I relate so much to your poem and the great ending that your spirit is free!
For the day it shows my shadow, In the night I sense my ghost' such wonderful lines, such beauty in the thought, even loneliness walks with rewards
A brilliant poem is so touchingly delineated. Nice penmanship with lofty theme. Thank you dear madam.