Isolation Comments

So nice a write. Quite rhyming and rhythmatic. Kudos.

finely written.................

an isolation of desire makes a perfect man......isolation to reach the phantom of the mind, leads every want to shed the truth of the call.....a very suggestive poem in our time.....wonderful my friend... God bless....a 10 ++++

Good write...10s....................

Now I am a muted enslave With no songs of outbrave Nor this pathos of mine will lave So I had made myself enclave -------- Alone and being isolated is such a pain and burden..........well written poem in great rhymes! ! ! Hope to see your children's poem someday! ! !

fine rhyme and rhythm depicting painful feeling of isolation...............a good write...

Perfactly disclosed the facts with fine rhyme and rhythm! 10+

Isolation is a punishment for a human being, as we are designed to interact with society, which keep our brains and heart healthy. Nice words and lines, reflecting very clearly of the state. voted 10

Nice indeed.. As always sir, what is significant in your lines is that emotions seem to ooze out through your poems.. and I like your use of rhymes.. sometimes with too much rhymes I find it difficult to bring out emotions.. Yet you do well friend... in fact it kinda make the reader move with your lines.. good.. love shan

nicely written.good remedy.thanx for sharing voted10 surya

If the pains of life become too much, isolation is one form of escape.

you can become a slave to isolation. NICE! A TEN

very cleaverly written! ! !