No rhythm, no rhyme,
death, sets you apart,
isolated in time,
when it's time to depart;
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Setting the spirit free and attaining salvation. A profound conceptualization. Congrats on the member poem of the Day.
Poem realistically depicting the mental status and thinking of a person getting closer to the final destiny. Well crafted. Congrats for being the member's PoD.
I actually had to listen to this as well as reading it, only then I got the drift of it. An optimistic poem. Well written. Congratulation! ! !
Tony, it's a well worded poem leaving the reader in suspense.
we have to live first in order to die the only question is why?
You can't get out. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Well-written, Tony++++++++ congrats on being selected for the day+++++++++
'No rhythm, no rhyme, death, sets you apart, isolated in time, ' the first three lines of this poem are quite profound to meditate upon, before the separation of 'when it's time to depart; ' with the finality of no choice developed in the pathos of the final lines.