Isolated Child Comments

wow nice poem, very interesting how, one may sometimes only be recognised when they are gone, goes to show how shalow society can be btw on one of the last lines i advise you switch the words guilt and pain around...i think it will sound better ;)

Helena, a very touching write.. for each fallen soldier that can not be replaced, will not be forgotten but remembered.....we learn from what we see, and fight on with courage.. Thanks for sharing all the best J.L

this poem isn't beautiful but at the same time it is because it doesnt speak of fantasies it speaks of real life

This is a poem with a mission - well done - Helena, the message hits home when one reads this. voted.

nice, deep. i see you have a talent. read mine. i am 15 now, but i wrote all my poems aged 13. i have only 1 posted so far, days of the past.