Sunday, November 20, 2016

Isn't There A Way Out? Comments

Rating: 5.0

My beliefs and your doubts can't go hand in hand
My vision and your perspective don't fit together
Isn't there a way out where our love
Erases the differences
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Susan Williams 13 February 2017

Your poem asks a question but I think you already carry the answer in your heart.... Love your fellow man..... Beautifully and powerfully written.10

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 December 2016

Hi Aarzoo, A beautiful poem on the power of the bond of love. How it can eclipse all differences and inequalities; finds answers to all questions. By simply raising the questions and dilemmas, raising doubts whether love could overcome everyday challenges, I think you have answered all of them by the silence in the affirmative. That is how I take it.. A full 10..

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Nosheen Irfan 30 November 2016

Love is powerful enough to erase the differences but at the same time love is often too weak to surmount the challenges it faces. But you have beautifully depicted the dilemma of love here. And raised questions that many of us need answers for. A succinct gem of a piece. A huge 10.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 23 November 2016

It occurs most of the times....loved it... :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 November 2016

We both plod in the path of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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