Monday, January 21, 2013

Isle Of Love I Comments

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As the lion searches for its prey,
so have i longed for you.
So sorry my anger drove you away
with you behind me
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Matt Starking
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Ruth Walters 30 January 2020

I liked this bu I'd advise you change it to the following. As the lion searches for its prey, so have i longed for you. So sorry my anger drove you away as with you behind me I was more comfortable. Why did i act like a fool, you're adorable. I betrayed you, I was carried away. Like a feather I was discouraged by bad weather We were a good pair but i did not treat you well.

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