Wednesday, March 12, 2008

Island Of Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Paradise in the middle
of a deep blue ocean
Bordered by beautiful
golden sandy beaches
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Hemakumar Nanayakkara
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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 14 July 2008

This is a great tribute to our mother lanka. Nicely penned.Well done. With Metta, Kolitha

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Juliette Lamoureux 07 July 2008

Oh my Gawd, I want to go there. That was a beautiful picture you created in my mind. Thankyou

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Indira Babbellapati 21 June 2008

as one who read a bit of srilankan writers, i see the island island coming alive to me...

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Jeannie Ann Clark 17 June 2008

Such a beautiful description of a paradise remaining today on earth. Paradise, worldwide, was the Creator's original plan, temporarily interrupted, soon to be fulfilled. Beautifully described, thank you. Jeannie

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~ Jon London ~ 31 May 2008

beautiful imagery you painted a stunning scene...your words sat in the sun and turned golden.........to match this amazing piece. *10* best wishes Jon

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Catherine Rica Cosico 30 May 2008

Wow! what an island you have...a great imagery in your poem..I enjoyed reading it... Cate

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2008

yes...that is the emerald isles...your mother land! i fully agree with you, hemakumar! congrats...

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Rose Falcone 05 May 2008

Hemakumar - your imagery was positively lovely.....makes me want to be there NOW! Thanks for sharing!

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Rema Prasanna 27 April 2008

awsome, perfect 10 for this, this is a wonderful poem, one could visualise the beauty of island in this

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Alison Cassidy 24 April 2008

This is quite lovely Hemakumar. I assume it's a description of your beloved Sri Lanka. What other place on this earth has quite the depth of exotic, lush color and brilliant skies. A thoroughly appealing poem, straight from the heart. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Tsira Goge 20 April 2008

H.N, Remarkable poems. I think, this is the latent nostalgia for you and for the reader of inspiration... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Ernestine Northover 20 April 2008

Lovely imagery and and wonderful words expressed here Hemarkumar, you have captured the whole scene beautifully. Well done. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Philip Housiaux 19 April 2008

Definitely a description of shi lanka and not switzerland. i understand that it is a bit of an island paradise and this beauty is well captured in a natural flowing style. keep writing

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Patricia Gale 17 April 2008

Nature's beauty seen through your words..... splendid.

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 16 April 2008

A precious gemstone come alive on the face of our wonderful world, blinking in so many various colours, as likewise is this simply fantastic poem itself, which describes this island jewel so brilliantly.

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Ivor Hogg 14 April 2008

Brings back memories from long ago when I was ayoung man and visited ceylon

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Ben Gieske 12 April 2008

Very pleasureable trip filled with food for all the senses. Nice the way you start at the seashore and then gradually work up into the heights and distances eventually out into the forever.

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Roland Bastien 04 April 2008

I had the feeling being in that place you discribe. It Must be the paradise from my heart

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Abha Sharma 22 March 2008

thanks for letting our eyes visualise the paradise with the beauty of words...

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 March 2008

stunning...................

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Colombo / Sri Lanka
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