Tuesday, June 3, 2008

Island Of My Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

The island in the distant places
Of my soul is quiet and light
Surrounded by savannah lake
A small ocean of sand, acacia
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Frank Bana
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Anita Atina 05 June 2008

Unshakable embrace, I'll never forget that phrase. Another gem crafted by you Frank! Cheers Anita

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bjanka im 03 June 2008

...i like this poem very much, I believe it touched everyone...

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John Thorkild Ellison 03 June 2008

A very pleasing poem, Frank. Well crafted. Thanks, John.

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Original Unknown Girl 03 June 2008

Frank - this is beautiful. The 3rd stanza stands out particularly for me, 'the yellow stars and blue mouth of the morning sky are smiling to be on our side' is mind-blowingly beautiful. Stunning work. HG: -) xx

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