Saturday, March 24, 2012

Island In A Sea Of Space Comments

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Night stroked the vision from the dream I became
While soothed to the pull from the door of the first page
The salt of ocean lingered in my nostrils that quivered
Confusion annulled existence rampant waves of haphazard rigor
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Poet Of The River 20 April 2012

I must say, i enjoyed reading this one. I like the mysterys of space and was glad to see a bit of that incorporated in your poem. good write.

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Kevin Patrick

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