Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Island (Haiku) Comments

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Mihaela Pirjol
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Valsa George 14 November 2018

A very well conceived haiku. The cake image of lime stone and salty water are so appropriate!

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M Asim Nehal 04 November 2018

Very intelligent haiku. Now you have mastered this art....I always imagined it as a floating mint in a lime-soda glass...10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2018

Salty juice is dropped inside the sea water and this is dropped on the island. The margins of island are really amazing. A brilliant poem is well penned.10

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