Friday, August 23, 2019

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sunlight cracks yellow
sea quenched sinks
pistachio greens leaves wet
citrus lemon rain
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Andy Brookes
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Bri Edwards 23 August 2019

I 'see' " desire" in this line: " breast curves voluptuous" , but otherwise i don't like the poem. let me see yet another. bri :)

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