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bilkkul sahi bole ki hindi poem sounds better.... vaise malum nahi tha ki yaha hindi poem bhi submit kar sakte hian.... to laga denge...

A very gr8 poem.I've tried several times writing in hindi but in vain. Zabardast kavita hai aapki, Zaroor mashoor ye hogi! ! With best regards, Nida Fathima

wonderful job. thank you. Barbara

Tell me, in the Hindu language of poetry, do the words rhym in this poem?

so nice of you to resubmit with translation... a very beautiful poem...i have been trying to learn hindi..but have so little examples...this is just beautiful

A good eye opener to those who are worried and go desperate in their lives.

Preets.... I maybe late here to comment on this one... but I am happy atleast that I am there. This is very beautifully done, just flawless. You have taken such a smooth flight on the subject matter with your expressive words in both hindi and english - one wonders..... if we are anywhere nearby? ! ? ! You are very talented and do wish and pray that you never stop writing - which may have done many times in our lives..... Keep writing and do not bother recognition..... Quotes from Geeta: Karm kiye jaa; phal ki chinta mat karr.....

Is Lishakte chaand ko dekh Karte hai yeh bhi ishara ek, Apnee shaayari ki roshni se Roshan karega poore jahaan me! ! Bohat khoob....just correct the typo in your title...think it should be Ishara. And in the translation I would have written 'test of life' rather than exam of life...but its upto u. Love...TO

preets...welcome back...the hindi poem is great and your translation is too good...it is said that poems translated by someoneelse is never readable...sice you did it yourself it is wonderful....love...nalini

Oh! what a beautiful poem is this? This will guide to see the life ahead. (it's more beautiful than Jab piyar ki shie se hotha hei!) . This can compare with Satyajit Rai's 'Apur'sTrilogy'.