This is also originally a song I wrote.
I'm lookin' around.
I'm not sure whats going on with me.
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Just a suggestion! Switch the last 2 stanzas. Great poem! So far my fav.
I like this one a lot. It reminds me of how I felt about my first crush. I really like it. Tyease
lol this is a sweet and lovely peom :) Beautiful :) 10+