My mind went blank
as I stared into the abyss
tortured by thoughts of farewell
boulders of tears stood in my eyes
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Nice poem, I love in the second part how you will not give up, you'll keep fighting untill you win back that heart again!
great work, love how there's positives in what at first seem to gloom very good work
What a tale of lost love....very lovely and tragic. Great work all the same.