Saturday, September 1, 2012

Is This What Parting Means? Comments

Rating: 4.3

My mind went blank
as I stared into the abyss
tortured by thoughts of farewell
boulders of tears stood in my eyes
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Shachia Oryila
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Nurain Ali-balogun 24 September 2012

What a tale of lost love....very lovely and tragic. Great work all the same.

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Darkangel Flyfree 02 September 2012

Nice poem, I love in the second part how you will not give up, you'll keep fighting untill you win back that heart again!

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Kelvin Owusu 01 September 2012

great work, love how there's positives in what at first seem to gloom very good work

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