Saturday, July 25, 2009

Is This What Love Is? (200th) Comments

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it matters not, if it's in black or white or color.
for in my heart there is no other.
the words that the LORD said to me
turned me around and set me free.
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Shashendra Amalshan 28 July 2009

his is the soulmate that i've been searching for and from this day, i will run no more. my heart felt like it was on fire my body ached with desire. my lips wanted to kiss those lips in front of me for that was all that i could see. my arms reached out so that i could embrace and those lips i wanted to taste. we were in each others arms faster than i thought for we found the love we sought. I loved this part/.... simply wonderful.... passionate too..... nice sir.. with lots of love to you shan

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Obed Souza 26 July 2009

Wonderdul! Love is an unending journey, it´s an encounter but also a journey into somebody´s else´s world. Lovely poem.

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wow....... nice 200th piece.......... and you put God in it.... so great.

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Christine Kerr 25 July 2009

Very interesting, Interesting because you can put in to words the feelings what other's just can't explain, The Song came to my head, 'Do I Stay Or Do I go Now' Something, I really have to listen to the next time I hear it. 200 great poems got through our door, I bet 200 more were left on the floor. Congratulations Louis

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~ Jon London ~ 25 July 2009

Louis Congrats on creating your 200th edition with this beautifully expressed poem of the purest of love.......Very well written and the tone of the speakers voice says it all...............it's lovely my friend

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