Is This True? Comments

Tears flood to my eyes. This can't be our last goodbye. You made me feel like i was on the tallest mountain, but then she came and it began to crumble. You said I was the water in your ocean but now she's the air on your earth. You said i was the garden of your life, but now she's the rose in your garden. You said i was your one and only, but it turns out that was one in a million chance and i was 2...but she was....... the whole piece of this writing in short story type is really written in a philosophical way and the innosence is appearing from it.. and it shows that..the words came from your the core of your heart.. really sweet written piece..10/10