Sunday, November 17, 2013

Is This The Only Way? Comments

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Is this the only way to
forget all your sorrows?

Is this the only way to
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Mary Amrutha
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Khairul Ahsan 27 February 2014

'Don't tell that I am a kid and I don't know a thing, may be I am to you but what I am telling is the TRUTH... ' This a good attempt, at telling a brother through a poem, the truth, which he won't otherwise listen to. Well done.

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Calvin Curdle 18 November 2013

I liked the way u hid the truth from me. It creates suspense.

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Mary Amrutha

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Ernakulam, kerala, India
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