Saturday, June 11, 2016

Is This The Life We Search For? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Agony pain and suffering
Where the sun is all burning
And the water bodies are becoming dry
he dense forest losing charm
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 07 December 2016

This is natural beauty which forced you to write on this subject, You are a fantastic poet by far your age.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

Peace and love! ! To respect life. Nice work.

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Darren Jkoeryo 11 June 2016

Nature alone cannot fulfil our desires hence we made concrete jungle and we prefer to live there and occasionally visit the nature to cherish the beauty, the metaphor Abandoned Boat speaks about the life left carefree with nature and its surrounding. The joy of living in real world against the artificial world is elusive due to human greed and creation. Great Poem MAN.

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Kelly Kurt 11 June 2016

It is a moment in life that when recognized and appreciated, brings perspective, joy and contentment. Not searched for, but found. Beautiful poem, Mohammed.

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