Is This Pain? Comments
down on my knees
bowed under the weight
of each accusing blow.
Is this pain, or am I praying?
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You write well, bringing together deep ways of thinking about life, sharing its calls with those close to us.This is an enlightening way of getting readers to look into everyday life and its trials I could feel your struggle in this poemThanks
How wonderfully well you put it....the dilemma of life, of being human. I love the use of science terminology to depict human feelings. Written with great finesse n flair. A sure 10.
Thank you, Nosheen, you caught exactly the emotional dilemma that was transfixing my heart at the moment these words came to the surface. A man trained in the sciences, yet, oh, so vulnerable to the common failures of living this messy life than cannot always be managed in neatly balanced equations.
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Your work is just extraodinary
I truly thank you for your gracious encouragement. The trials and blessings of life are so much more meaningful when we can share our comfort and victories with each other along the way. You have blessed me with your kind words today. Thank you!