Sunday, September 29, 2013

Is This My Crime? Comments

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You snap the first fans of my feeble feel
You say-Dare not ring the bells of dream
What is a dream-what is a feel, an unknown zone?
This deal is hard to hang for it’s my prime
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Soumita Sarkar
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Valsa George 05 October 2013

In a male dominated society, this is the plight of most of the women! You feed me air of inferiority so fear touches my profile Thus strength stolen, self fallen I become docile This dependence of my being on you feeds your ego This is the clever tactics employed by many a man! Enjoyed this open statement of blunt realities

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Sankar Sehanabis 02 October 2013

Excellent Nice and sensational poem. Write more.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 01 October 2013

I am a shadow of man that can never grow, this is my crime. it truly, poet, is an arduous journey for women to create an identity solely her own. great write.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 September 2013

Beautiful poem Soumita Dare not ring the bells of dream what a beautiful garland of words 10

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