Saturday, August 8, 2009

Is This Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

i love you you yell
as you look in my eyes
for the frist time i believed you
is there really no more lies
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lindsay rose
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Jen Capaldi 20 September 2009

nicely penned. to the point with your emotions. love and pain hand in hand. keep writing! ! Jen

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Noel Horlanda 20 September 2009

it's language of sadness, regrets but romantic in any way. Well penned, Lindsay.

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MKG F 14 August 2009

hey! nice write... ;)

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very powerful Linds :)

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Black & White Right 08 August 2009

sincere. simplistic and pure..

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 08 August 2009

what an intense love...............truly! ! !

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