Fading through the unknown
Winds alighting
From night till morning
Grueling intimacy breaks the silence dawn
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ANOTHER GOOD POEM I READ FROM UR COLLECTIONS HON...VERY well done..mmmm mmmm mmmm i really like the thought..amazing, exciting, thrill, , , mmmmspeechless
You have the most remarkable and amazing talent of bringing your words to life and letting them reach out and touch ones soul....truly more than a poem...this is passion, affection, LOVE....keep it up Sulaiman! ! ! ! : -)
I gave this a 7 because there was too much of the poem that expressed things that seemed to be divorced from the loving expressions as they appeared. Their wording was not the best I thought. Just when I expected something beautiful, it seemed to disappear. GW62
You has to be in love to write such a poem, marvelous work of words!
kudos on the top500! This is a really expressive poem. Beautiful, thanks for sharing.
awesome! It has a nice rhythm and flow to it. You should consider writing a book!
Waw! ! So moving, so thought provoking, so breathtakingly, wonderfully uplifting.
love it! ! ! my gosh i want want a special poem because your words are beautiful! o my i will be reading you poems =]