Monday, April 6, 2009

Is This A Friend Comments

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i thought i saw you standing there
from the corner of my eye.
i thought i heard your voice
telling all those lies.
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louis rams
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Pablo Cruise 08 April 2009

The triumph is in the words, Louis. Powered sentiments.

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Christine Kerr 07 April 2009

Great write Louis, A hard lesson to learn but another way to give is to just put it out there and watch the reaction with a don't give a s**t attitude. Those remarks never seem to go as far. Still a great poem put well together.10++

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Sandra Fowler 07 April 2009

We have all had similar experiences.But that does not make it any less painful. I wish you a better friend the next time around. Very touching. Kind regards, Sandra

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 April 2009

Everyone experience this thing at some point of time in their life.........as saying goes.....you can share your secret with 2 person if both of them are dead.........God write..........10+++........

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very good poetry. I love it bro.. hope it is just good poetry though

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Heather S 06 April 2009

now this is a wonderful poem, the key to life is frendship and sadly many of my 'friends' have not kept all my darkest secrets and theyre floating around somewhere, anyways this is yet another of your poems going into my favs! ! :) Love Heather Stephens

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a poem..a situation in everybody's life..you have put it very well..to buy a friends silence..great piece

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