Wednesday, September 20, 2017
Is There Anything Wrong? Comments
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It was a dark sky of late evening
The loving eyes are not so bright
A fading tune is so melancholic
Is the sky mourning at night?
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Jazib Kamalvi
06 November 2017
A refined poetic imagination, Ruma Ch. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
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7/22/2025 11:59:20 PM # 1.0.0
'But no one knows what happens Why the cupid desires wars? Why mourning tears are rolling as rain From the covered silvery stars? ' - An excellent stanza to conclude the poem.
Thank you Khairul Ji. Your comment is a great source of inspiration. It always helps me to write better. Hope you are well. Best wishes. _ Ruma.