Thursday, March 23, 2006

Is There Anybody Out There? Comments

Rating: 4.7

Hello,
Is that you over there?
Can you see me?
Don't walk away, I'm here!
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Charlie F. Kane
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STRONG WRITE, CHARLIE...YOU GOT ME THINKIN' OF ' FLOYD '' WHILE INDULGING IN THIS PIECE...GOOD STRUCTURE, NICE FLUX...EVER DEAD THE LYRICS OF THE 70's & 80's ROCK GROUP, KING CRIMSON? CHECK IT OUT...I TOLD POE TO, BUT HE NEVER GOT BACK TO ME....EVER WRITE CRYPTIC VERSE...TIS A SPOOKED VENTURE, BUT A BASH OF FUN... A TEN FOR THE ONE OUT THERE...

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Sebastian Hau-Walker 27 March 2006

..But arent we all alone...thanks to solipscism? ? I ask you that my friends.... sebxx

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Missy Trinity Ferrari. 25 March 2006

Ok ill say something different.... hmmm..... distance in your mind and distance in physical being are two different things... but with this you cant tell great job love, Melissa

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Kristin Glaubitz 23 March 2006

This poem relates to the way a lot of people think. The only thing I really didn't like is why would you ask if you're alone if you don't think your alone? But otherwise awesome job!

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Guarded Heart 23 March 2006

Its a fabulous piece about what everybody's thinking but no ones saying

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Charlie F. Kane

Charlie F. Kane

Solihull, Birmingham
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