Hello,
Is that you over there?
Can you see me?
Don't walk away, I'm here!
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..But arent we all alone...thanks to solipscism? ? I ask you that my friends.... sebxx
Ok ill say something different.... hmmm..... distance in your mind and distance in physical being are two different things... but with this you cant tell great job love, Melissa
This poem relates to the way a lot of people think. The only thing I really didn't like is why would you ask if you're alone if you don't think your alone? But otherwise awesome job!
Its a fabulous piece about what everybody's thinking but no ones saying
STRONG WRITE, CHARLIE...YOU GOT ME THINKIN' OF ' FLOYD '' WHILE INDULGING IN THIS PIECE...GOOD STRUCTURE, NICE FLUX...EVER DEAD THE LYRICS OF THE 70's & 80's ROCK GROUP, KING CRIMSON? CHECK IT OUT...I TOLD POE TO, BUT HE NEVER GOT BACK TO ME....EVER WRITE CRYPTIC VERSE...TIS A SPOOKED VENTURE, BUT A BASH OF FUN... A TEN FOR THE ONE OUT THERE...