~ Is The Way Of Life ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
17 July 17,2010
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you write as words come to you. your words are free and not restricted. absolutely love <3
you write and rhyme real well... it seems as if you don't have to think it through as much of how life is with you... God bless you.
What a great write. Such a play with words. I am amazed how well yu play with the readers senses. Still thinking about it :)
Indeed a post modern poem with all the flamboyancy of fevering youth and very well coinage of words and deployment in picturesque fashion …classy…fine cut and polished 10++
'''Delete relit replete and complete ~ Is the way of life Scan LAN ban can ~ Is the way of life Junk funk drunk with pinch of crank ~ Is the way of life.''' homonyms....nicely done....
An interesting read. Great concepts of word analogy. congrats! ; D
The poem, very tiny, is hiden beneath the folds of glossaries. Getting there needs effort, and once there, it is worth a 10.
Congrags the completion and the review of the followed ways, go ahead and find out the different ways 10+
Life always has two diametrically opposite dimensions or two extreme peaks of a wave (analogy sound wave or alternating current wave) as called “Crest” and “Trough”.I must say a life gets complete with deplete and replete.Nicely incorporated various facets of life appearing cocurrently and countercurrently.Poetry certainly adds to completeness in a poet’s life. After a day’s office work if I read a book or even watch TV, I doze off but when sit before PH I get refreshed. Your poem is also a stimulant for me to do away with my weariness. Excellent, ten by ten.
Very well expressed and highlighting the necessity for aesthetic joys in addition to high-tech interactions.
Many will never know, what grace it is to have a poet like you on this web site. Its not just your creativity or uniqueness...I am always looking for different ways to do something new and YOUR works are some of the stuff that I look at. You have clearly captured a cultural theme. Expressing an aspect of society and doing 'poetic justice' to this piece. Great work 10/10
Happy anniversary! PH is the place were you shared your great work with the WWW but, your poetry birthed when you birthed and will live eternallly. Thanks for sharing...in poetry et al things 'Each-one-teach-one' Love Mom
Wonderful to read you, Nivedita, and may you write more and more as you go through edit relit remit visit Congratulations and happy anniversary
Starting from CHECKMATE, you have miles to go before you sleep.....Congratulation dear Niv...Let us say: Creativity is a way of life....
Wonderful poem, good...........