Tuesday, August 18, 2009

Is That Your Woman? Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the alleyways of Moscow
when life gets stuck into ideologies divided
in a rut,
Appears you need to break the ice
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Rishav Rastogi
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Anjali Sinha 24 August 2009

wow a lovely poem rich in text and vocab ill give u a tenner anjali (do read any of mine)

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Melvin Banggollay 20 August 2009

You have the skill of picturing in poetic manner pictures that reflects your mind's imagination and reflections. Great write and welcome to the poemhunter's ciurcle... good luck

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Sandra Fowler 19 August 2009

you have a way with words. Praise for your rich vocabulary. Your first stanza is your best stanza. And, of course, welcome to poemhunter.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 19 August 2009

Illuminant starting.......So much realistic......and touch the every sting of heart.....welcome to the poemhunter........

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Nikunj Sharma 18 August 2009

incredible, international roaming comes free with your poetry.........bit long though...but good one.........10.......

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Aarif Ameen 18 August 2009

10+ good luck take care

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 August 2009

a tour you take us on...beautifully narrated..women are different everywhere

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 August 2009

rishav it is all phenomenal expression with deep sense of narration. i had soem russian frineds too. ur judgementabt woman is pferfect and precisely correct.. good work....10

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Afzal Shauq 18 August 2009

Deadlocked in passions' dormancy the dead hours of night and when morning comes its all the attorneys, Claiming off the heroic darkness dropped in the day of a rapist to tell how well you endure time, money and energy you think yours and they are not, Is that a woman? Is that your woman? inspiring..and travelogue type sweet poem.I really enjoyed it and say well done..its good enough and interesting one 10/10

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Nimal Dunuhinga 18 August 2009

A strong poem that tells about a strong character, well done!

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Deborah Cromer 18 August 2009

You have good choices of powerful words to describe your thoughts. Good thought structure to convey your idea. You have combined some special words with emotions to tell a story. If you can say what you said, but in a shorter more potent version, that would be awesome. Thanks for the invitation to read your first poem posted! Deborah Cromer

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Rishav Rastogi

Rishav Rastogi

Tezu, Arunachal Pradesh, India
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