Is crying really that immature?
It's the bodies own self-cure
A way to rid out all the pain
The only way to keep one self sane
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this poem is very ironic.the way you portay the the uplift of ones suicidal thoughts and actions it really does make the reader wonder is suicide really that bad.
you write really well miss lady, i really hope u r jus venting cos freak we need poets tht can stil write POETRY! ! ! so please dnt check out.. word
the thing about suicide is that its final and unlike cutting it does'nt fade in time... but we are all entitled to feel how we like.
...........I suggest you try it as it's the only way you'll find out.