Friday, March 11, 2011

*is Society To Blame? Comments

Rating: 2.8

She was beautiful
But she didn't see beauty like I saw it
She was undefined, prone to cry
Just a little undeveloped
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Rajendran Muthiah 03 June 2017

A tragic tale is said in an obscene way. What unwritten law she saw? Is it the woeful fate?

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Amy Marie 29 May 2017

Yeah, it really is unfortunate how society affects a female's self-image. Well done.

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~Deana ~ Dotterweich 31 January 2012

Wow...amazing...greatly written with true emotion...

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Scarlet Shay 14 March 2011

This is a wonderful poem. It really opened my eyes

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