Is poetry like a game of chess,
Trying to think 12 moves ahead.
I can't type out the words quick enough,
With the images that fill my head.
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well done you have used Very good metaphor in this poem and addressing very important issue..I call that strategy 'the economy of using words'..but you are right some times the poetry moves to different directions and works such as a chess game...thanks for sharing this unique inspiration...10 as usual.
Thank you Soran for your kind and most interesting comment. I like your phrase 'the economy of using words'. How right you are. It's choosing the right word/words in a poems structure its beat, flow, meter. Sometimes its easy most times not so easy. Thanks again Soran and keep writing my friend.Keep writing. For your poems and writing are more than magical. Take care.
spot on. I can be getting on with something or at work and have to stop what im doing and write something before I forget. also when im writing I do jump ahead so I get this x
Thanks for your kind comment Karen.I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. And you get the meaning and logic behind it. Thanks again and stay well and healthy and all the loved ones around you.