Monday, October 15, 2018

Is Not Change Our Destiny? Comments

Rating: 4.8

Things seem hazy as I look into the horizon
And see the sky changing its' color
Tangerine, white, blue and cyan
Is not change our destiny?
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 09 July 2020

A beautiful poem enjoyed reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2018

Horizon gives amazing and hazy perceptions. One wave amazingly follows another and you feel this truth. Thoughts fly like butterfly and you feel mind's freedom. A brilliant poem is excellently penned...10

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M Asim Nehal 17 October 2018

Thx Much. .

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 October 2018

Destiny is always an enigma.It has its twists and turns. Sometimes, we say, destiny is our own making. Sometimes it is fate and all depends on that Book Of Life. We are at its mercy. A beautiful poem on life that has a meaningful message. I concur with the wonderful comment of Darren. A well conveyed and composed write.10+++×

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M Asim Nehal 16 October 2018

Thx Much Rose MJ

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 October 2018

So many things in life makes our destiny and you put them all in this wonderful poem.Thanks for sharing it Asim.

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M Asim Nehal 16 October 2018

Thx Much Darren J

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