I was only sixteen
When I stept out onto the window ledge and slipped
it never entered my head
to go get a ladder to fix
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A unique experience of time warp has been told in symbol of falling down a ladder. It's a well-written poem.
Only a matter of time. we are within the time-frame. good poem. I invite you to read my poems and comment please.
Its strange what a memory can do to you, it sounds to me your date with fate was adverted by good circumstance, like the second stanza perhaps were all falling down and we dont even see it. Next time get your friends Mum to do it
Falling...like in a dream startling you with a jolt... Great poem glad I took the time to read.....
Great poem maybe they'll be someone to catch you before you go bump BB : O)
A lovely poem Dave. We will all hit the ground one day with a big thud.
Very wistful poem Dave - I think we are all falling through life, and we will certainly all hit the ground one day.
As a human I have been to the edge of many hells like this one, beautiful poem.