I am holy father I am thinking,
My children are ever linking.
Where is my holy son I know,
For me devotion he does show.
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When troubles beset us, we complain that God is sleeping! Never.....! The son of God is ever alert and he was sent to the earth by the Heavenly Father to redeem mankind! The Christian belief of the Father and Son are beautifully incorporated in this religious write!
Nice observation is made on sleeping of son. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.
I know my son is singing new song, He is in my touch although in long. He transfers my message in wisdom, He is king of kings in your kingdom..- a wonderful spiritual poem . you are a great spiritual poet. tony
my holy son, my glory, meaningful sir. how are you? Namaskar sir.
picture of Angel mia LOVE xAdorable poem wow excellent ink...tfs my friend xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo God bless you 30 Apr 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xMoving and very creative. Lovely poem thinking as Him. 30 Apr 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of blue......... xgood work 30 Apr 2015 by blue......... | Reply picture of moeze lalji xLovely poem 30 Apr 2015 by moeze lalji | Reply
Son should take rest after hard work. However you have expressed your filial love nicely here.