Sunday, August 27, 2017

Is Love A Fever Or A Deadly Chill? Comments

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Merriment is gone, let those laughs be still,
is love a fever or a deadly chill?
The burning fire and the numbing freeze
mete out the symptoms of this dread disease;
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Captain Cur 07 September 2017

Susan, the doctor is in. However, the waiting room appears extremely crowded. Thanks for the comment.

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Susan Williams 06 September 2017

You know the disease well, Captain! Love carries a two-edged sword and wields it with a vengeance- - sweet memories on one side and painful regrets on the other. But we all dive back in hoping for the thrill of the fire! !

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Rini Shibu 28 August 2017

Captain this is a nice love poem.. Love chills better not to cure, it's a good experience

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Captain Cur 07 September 2017

Thank you Rini. I guess one can always throw on an overcoat, until of course, the fever spikes.

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