Thursday, September 29, 2011

Is Life A Riddle? Comments

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When every hope is struggled,
And need to cross a lot of hurdles,
When memory reminds every flash,
And needs to be relaxed,
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simran arora
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Hans Vr 03 October 2011

This good Arora Keep it up

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Kaitreena Stwert 30 September 2011

i like your poem. Question mark included on every end, It may on teachers face or friend, Our life truly become a riddle, And every word start pinching, Our heart like a needle, Great effort, nice lines and very impressive style of writing all the best Keep it up.

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