Sunday, January 22, 2006

Is It You, Dad? Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sitting on a bollard
by the harbour wall
that old seagull
staring at me
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Pete Crowther
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Emma Johnson 11 February 2006

You speak of seagulls, I speak of 'a swallow, or a dropp in the sea / a floating cloud, or a leaf on a tree' ('The Sign') . We do have affinities. Bless You.

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A. B. 24 January 2006

I agree with Ernestine. Nice work Pete. Peace.

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Scarborough Gypsy 23 January 2006

Your thoughts are very nicely translated into a lovely poem. When ever I see a rainbow, I believe it is my dad paying me a visit. :) Gyp's

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Ernestine Northover 22 January 2006

Great write Peter, starting serious and then ending with humour, Nicely written this one. Enjoyed it. Love Ernestine XXX

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Hull, East Yorkshire, England
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