Monday, February 11, 2008

Is It You? Comments

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Is it you?
My heart is trembling, like a rock slide.
I miss you, I want you to come back.. to me...not any one else.
I want to feel your fur, I want to put my fingers threw your long black mane. I miss you. I want you back.
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Tyler Tillett
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Kye Kurion 05 April 2008

I feel dumb, everyone in the comments said horse. While reading, I thought it was lion. The word mane threw me off.

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Niq Castro 12 March 2008

it's about a horse... right? well, i felt a simple sensation while reading it.. =^.^=

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MCKENZi : ] 11 March 2008

well at first i thought this poem was about a guy - and obviously if you keep reading, it's about a horse. otherwise, this poem would have been pretty perverted. haha.: ] but anyways, good poem.

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Sparklle Rainne 08 March 2008

I like this one best out of all of your poems. It's eloquent, but in a simple way if that makes any sense. Great emotion. Very nice. =)

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