James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Is It Wicked Of Me If I Comments

Rating: 4.1

is it wicked of me if i;
buy a peach and it's too soft and ripe.
what if after words it does what you thought
it would do and then it well, just might.
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Emu Getachew 15 October 2009

I laughed so hard I had to re-read it so many times. Maybe my train of thought is completely off. However, I say touched or not touched, ripped or hard there is no guaranty until you brought it home and piled it yourself/or bit it...loveddddddd playing with words. I invite you also to read some of my works...

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Shashendra Amalshan 14 October 2009

This is such a juicy poem.. I loved it.. A different kinda poem. always like when some one do something different.. this is good 10++ regards shan

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Fairy Li 11 October 2009

I like this sentence so much... what if after words it does what you thought it would do and then it might just. and yes you know my fingers are more than, well...a kind of innocent wicked

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Tia Maria 11 October 2009

Excellent! A very clever write.... Isn't life just peachy: -) Good luck: -) T

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Juniper March 08 October 2009

what a delicious poem you taunt and almost say but don't quite say and just play with our imagination just awesome unique and new.10

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Tai Chi Italy 07 October 2009

Yes it is wicked of you, but that is what makes you! as with the peach...depends where you pick it up from...the market down the dock often sell over ripe goods. You delve deep into my own wicked indiscreets! brilliantly. Smiling at you, off to charm school heaven Tai, determined to meet my fruity quota

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Quin Faas 07 October 2009

i adore this piece, ... it's sticky... nicely titled.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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