They say it's better to have failed in love than to never have tried.
I wonder if its worth the tears that are cried
And being damaged inside
When we take on board the pain from someone who lied
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This conceptual poem has the ideas behind it.The ideas supersede other “aesthetic” notions. These ideas take form of a contrast. They are seemingly oxymoronic forms, because the contradictory ideas are passive and they are used for the integration of the basic ideas.It is not a passive contemplation but an active creation of beauty....10
'Taking on board the pain of someone who lied' is a major challenge and this verse quite honestly admits that at times there is no other answer than regret - very well written....10 from Fay.