Sunday, October 27, 2013

Is It Possible? Is It True? Comments

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Is It Possible? Is It True?
That I would walk again under my childhood sky hues
I would run in ancient fields, and re-live again those innocent walks
And I see the rising sun with birds in the skies and the circling hawks
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Nero CaroZiv
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Kevin Patrick 29 September 2015

Sometimes I am lazy and read works without commenting, but I had to log on to say this is a heartwarming poem that really gets to me and really touches me on a personal level, childhood was not a pleasant time for me and I would never like to relive it but their is an innocence and magic about being a kid that the cynicism of adulthood ruins. Every line here is perfection it dazzles with a magic and whimsy. Awesome stuff!

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